Target Audience
The primary target audience of the Bodmin
College Magazine is the students, aged between 11 and 19, of both genders. The secondary target audience of the Bodmin
College Magazine is the parents and carers of the students.
Masthead
The masthead does not fit the purpose
because of a number of reasons. One reason is that the masthead is too small,
because usually a masthead takes up one eighth of the page. Another reason is
that the colours do not stand out against the background, which is also
irrelevant to the subject of the newspaper. In short, this masthead does not
fulfill the purpose of appealing to the target audience of the students. The
masthead connotes that this school is old and a throwback to the 80’s, not
fitting with the school at all.
Layout
The layout of the front cover does not
follow common workings of magazines, because it features three images on the
front, none of which are particularly eye-catching or fitting with the
masthead, as a magazine front cover should. There is no singular main image
that draws the eye. Normally, there is one main image with some text and
occasionally another small inset picture. It does not appeal to many of the
target audience, appealing more to female dance students than the rest of the
students.
Colour
The colours of the text are not readable
compared to the images in the background, because the text has over-lapped the
images and they do not follow the common convention that only about 5 colours
are used on the cover of the magazine, instead using almost every colour
available.
Imagery
The three images shown in the front cover
are all taken as long shots that have blurred because they have been zoomed in
and cropped too far, so the pictures are out of focus. Also, the smoke effect
in the bottom-right corner does not look very good, looking more like the
printer ran out of ink.
Typography/Text
There is not much text on the front cover.
In terms of denotation, there are no story hooks or teasers, and no issue
number. The text for the main story is hardly readable, and reads “Bodmin
College’s 13th Community Dance Platform.” This immediately loses the
interest of anyone who was not involved in Dance, which is a large number of
the target audience.
Overall, this cover is not very good,
following none of the common trends of a magazine, with no strapline, teasers
or issue number.
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